Poetry Thursday. What an image prompts
Poetry Thursday's (completely and totally optional) suggestion this week is that we write a poem inspired by an image, and post the photo which prompted the poem. OK. I took the challenge, and decided to go to the photos I've taken over the past few months, select one without giving it too much thought, and see what it would prompt. This is the image I chose:
.........................................Under the Rainbow
................................This is what fell to earth for you, my sister:
................................All the wishes you have sent into the sky,
................................night wishes and wishes whispered;
................................wishes I was sending with you too.
................................Look what landed outside your window,
................................Sister. Look at the wealth winter brought.
................................Across the long shadow of a January day
................................colour dropped, and its echo, and the echo
................................again – Brightness for you.
................................Mine are the echoes of the echo. Mine are the
................................little rainbows that come into my room, now,
................................on the eve of a new year, as spring turns
................................round. Through the prism of one joy-tear.
................................This is what falls to earth for you, my sister:
................................every smile you have given out, every kindness
................................you have offered, your goodness returned.
................................Love has come to find you. Love.
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I took that photo from my sister's living-room window in January. She's just become engaged, and this poem is to celebrate that and her birthday this week... She's the friend of my heart, my companion through life in many ways. We are 15 months apart, and have shared a great deal of the ups and downs in life. So, here's another view from A's window. Can you make out that that is a double rainbow? It was!
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Labels: family, Poetry Thursday, sisters
16 Comments:
Yes, I see it! How beautiful. I love your poem, so full of love. :)
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A lovely poem for a beautiful picture. I used to live in central Wales and saw many wonderful rainbows arching over the hills and fields from my window. Well written.
I see the double rainbow too! Lovely to write a poem for your sister, I'm sure she's delighted!
The love for your sister out shines the double rainbow (gorgeous). Selfless love...beautiful! Lucky pair!
I very much enjoyed the variations in pace you created through the different sentence lengths. I think the final word is particularly powerful and somehow non-cliched, because of the way you've set it up. It can be taken in so many ways (echo, term of affection, imperative... ), so it opens up rather than closes the poem.
"Through the prism of one joy-tear"
absolutely lovely. double rainbows are highly auspicious. such a touching tribute.
Oh, I so so loved this! How heartfelt! I loved the line, "my echoes are the echo of the echo"... just a beautiful poem for you sister!
I love double rainbows too! Great picture taking here!
I really enjoyed this! It is very uplifting and filled with sisterly love ;)
How positively lovely. How I wish I had a sister!
What a lovely tribute to your sister. This reminds me of a sermon I heard once about prayers for children and grandchildren gently falling and returning from heaven on them like a soft rain.
My PT is up. http://collectingmythoughts.blogspot.com/2007/03/poetry-thursday-12-todays-challenge-is.html
A double rainbow! How magical! These beautiful image(s) inspired a lovely tribute to your sister. What a sweet, loving sister you are! Hope she has a wonderful birthday.
Your poem is the perfect medium for your thoughts - a beautiful read
I love rainbows!
I can feeel thel ove in your poem for your sister. Beautiful rainbow(s).
gautami
Soul
Rainbows are special. I often see one just when I need to know that all is well and there is something good ahead. Just like for you and your sister. Beautiful words in the poem you wrote for your sister. Made me smile.
I love this sister blessing and the sister rainbows.
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