One Deep Breath - Sleep
It's been a long time since I posted a haiku for One Deep Breath but today, there is one I can share. This week's topic is "Sleep"
.........................In my deep, wide bed
.....................Hypnos takes me in his arms
.........................Peace, comfort - all night.
Thanks to all the participants who offer a moment's breath along with their haiku.
posted by GreenishLady @ 5:23 pm
14 Comments:
What a restful haiku, Imelda - thank you.
Nice, very nice. ;)
i love the deep, wide bed image...
I am in mine right now!
:)
Love the romantic notion of "Hypnos taking me in his arms to sleep".
I wrote about his brother Morpheus.
Well that sounds wonderful!
What great images. Feeling rested after reading this.
Oh, I would love to feel that way when I sleep...
I like your intro and exit as much as I like your poem. I hope you find others you can share in the coming weeks.
i found this so calming...i particularly liked the slow lingering rhythm of the first line
This was a lovely haiku and it's always great to see your writing. xxoo
Awesome!
beautiful...
(thank you for your words on my blog yesterday...thank you)
imelda!
glad you found my blog
(so that i could find you!!)
:)
i love your writing!
this haiku is great!
occassionlly i write haiku. but its a mood thing with me. once i kept a whole journal only in haiku.
I love this, so soothing and resful and peaceful.
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