Poetry Thursday. Another Self
Poetry Thursday this week offers us the chance to be someone else. I'm not sure I agree with the assumption that poetry should always speak of the poet's personal experience and life. - Much poetry is written out of a persona which the poet adopts, even if it is prompted by some personal experience. A poem (is this a hobby-horse of mine? Did I say something similar when we wrote about Confessional Poetry?) can be authentic without necessarily being TRUE. One of my favourite quotes from Natalie Goldberg is "You are not your poem". I hold to this.

..........SIEN’S LAMENT
.............That impossible man
.............goes out, and I am hoping
.............there will be a little ham,
.............some coffee, soft bread
.............for the few guilders
.............that came in the post.
.............His haul, when he returns,
.............dumped triumphantly
.............on the kitchen table:
.............tubes of ochre, cobalt
.............and Prussian blue,
.............Naples yellow,
.............terra sienna, ultramarine,
.............gamboges;
.............a roll of canvas.
.............From the corner
.............my baby’s cry rises,
.............and I wail Vincent,
.............who can eat a painting?

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Labels: Poetry Thursday, Van Gogh
13 Comments:
That's wonderful, Imelda! What a great creative response to the prompt. I've imagined, at times, how hard it must have been to live with so MANY of the great men of history.
I love the last line! I know that Van Gogh was so poor he had to borrow money from his brother for food, I wonder if his brother, who seems the more level-headed of the two, would have known he wasn't feeding his model? The story of Van Gogh giving up food for paint is one I always tell my students. I really like your idea of writing from Sien's point of view. Takes writing "like" someone else to a new level.
Absolutely wonderful! The last line is indeed great!! Thanks!!
This is so creative and well written! I can just picture poor Sien, trying to make ends meet with "that impossible man."
I also enjoyed your catalog of paint colors - such musical names they have :)
A treat of a poem, and a super take on the PT suggestion.
BTW, thank you for your kind words on my poem this week - much appreciated :)
What a cool idea - I really love this!
Wow--I love the detail of colors and the persona you took on. Very nice!
i love this. i agree with all the good stuff everyone has already said. i especially love all the references to color.
A wonderful idea all right. VG sounds a little like an artist I know - someone very close to home (my son) ... he would buy paint over food every time (except he doesn't buy paint over food for his dog.)
A great poem. Thanks.
Great artists, great works, great egos and totally self centred. You have captured it perfectly!
That was a neat take on a model's view of being with an artist:) I could have never been with him :)
Love the "impossible man" beginning that sets us up but doesn't give the details away.
Thanks for stopping and commenting on my site :)
Oh, I love this one! It captures that conflict between practicality and grand obsession so well. I think women in general may be less inclined to give over completely to the grand obsessions (tempting though they may be), because we DO think - well, then what will we eat and how will we feed the children?
Thanks for a great post.
Wonderful and very creative!
I have been ill and seem to have missed all the fun.
Do you know what's up for this week?
Something seems to have changed.
bd
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