GreenishLady

Originally Blogging the Artist's Way. Thoughts, musings, experience of the 12-week course, January to March 2006. And after that?.... Life, creativity, writing. Where does it all meet? Here, perhaps.

Tuesday, July 18, 2006

Urban Haiku

This week's topic at One Deep Breath is Urban Haiku.

My memory of my hometown, and the trip home from school:


From town on the bus
Pass jail, asylum, graveyard,
houses in neat rows.

Read more Haiku Here.

10 Comments:

At 19/7/06 12:01 am, Blogger Wenda said...

What an orderly view! Thanks for your comment on my planned closure ritual. It makes such good sense, I'm not sure why I didn't think of it sooner. I'm the one who in 1987 threw myself a divorce party and invited all my friends.

 
At 19/7/06 3:06 am, Blogger Star said...

What a colorful assortment to see on your way. Very creative haiku!

 
At 19/7/06 4:22 am, Blogger Jennifer said...

excellent :)

 
At 19/7/06 5:23 am, Blogger deirdre said...

I could see those houses in rows as I was reading. This is nice.

 
At 19/7/06 9:04 am, Blogger ian russell said...

boy, that's a tough sounding part of town you come from! but sometimes most urban life feels like that.

great haiku, superb imagery.

 
At 19/7/06 11:49 am, Blogger kerrdelune said...

Greenish Lady, I love this haiku, wording so clear and resonant that I can "see" the whole scene in my mind's eye and partake of your childhood journey too.

 
At 19/7/06 2:57 pm, Blogger Tammy said...

That's urban alright :) Lovely Haiku.

 
At 20/7/06 8:36 am, Blogger chiefbiscuit said...

So well put. I loved your Baggage story too. That 'letting go' trick is a powerful thing.

 
At 21/7/06 3:55 am, Blogger susanlavonne said...

what a great deal of imagery with so few words!

 
At 23/7/06 3:52 am, Blogger avocadoinparadise said...

Great piece. Two places that are ok to be, with a bunch that are not ok to be sandwiched in between. :)

 

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